7.5.09

English 11-58 101

Nicolette Smith
111-58
Reflection
May 5, 2009


My journey through English III
Coming into this section of English, I never thought I would learn the things I
would learn. My first expectation was to take plenty of notes and read plenty of novels or
segments out of novels, but it was quite the contrary. In Mr.Gasparos’ class I believe he
gave us the option of learning as adults and that was the most important thing to me in
the learning process. Everyone was treated equally and I believed he conjured up a learning
plan to fit each and every person’s needs and especially wants. I (believe that a lot of students do
not learn too much from taking notes and Mr.Gasparo stepped out of the “ordinary
teaching box” to actually give the students a hands-on learning experience. Through the song
lyrics of Bruce Springsteen to the previous Student examples, Paul prepared us all in section 58
for all the writing assignment’s that we had to create. The assignments that we had to create, I
admit had caught me off guard because I was not prepared to write detailed papers in a short
amount of time.
Above all, the writing process was a journey. I enjoyed writing and conveying my
emotions into words and phrases. I also enjoyed arguing about a topic, in which I am passionate
about; Hip hop. Going back to our Diagnostic essay, our first assignment I noticed a lot of errors
and detail that I left uncovered. At that point I thought my essay was perfect, which it was not,
but I was very satisfied and comfortable with the structure. Until Paul gave us a chance at the
end of

our learning’s to correct these mistakes, I am glad we had that option. That option made
my time in Paul’s class more enjoyable and meaningful. At the end of this semester we
had an opportunity for extra credit, which was to review the movie; Wolverine, The
Origin. The extra credit paper was the best assignment yet, I had the chance to critic and
review a movie that I would never watch on the normal bases. That was very interesting
to me, I enjoyed watching the movie and giving the proper review. At first I wasn’t into
watching an action film about killing, mutants, and malicious violence. But, by watching
it I had the chance to really learn what it was about. It had an amazing storyline that kept
the viewer interested and Wolverine had an origin, basically a history that would
keep someone such as myself entertained. After doing the movie review, I wondered
why Paul never really gave our class the option to review or critique movies before.
But I noticed throughout the whole semester we were practicing our reviewing techniques
through samples of music, articles, and even YouTube videos. I probably would have
enjoyed reviewing stories and movies over writing essays, but I’m sure anyone would.
The adventure through Paul’s class had me wondering about what we would do next
even though he did a good job preparing us for what was in store by keeping the class’
itinerary up-to date. The structure of the class turned out perfectly despite that I had
a early passing in my family, close to the end of the semester. I had numerous papers
due and the stress of what was at hand, had me feeling overwhelmed and defeated.
Gratefully enough, I pulled it all together and tried to accomplish as much as I can
in a small amount of time. I am now triumphant because I made it through Paul’s
class by the whim of my spirit and I hope I made it through the criteria we all had
to experience. I want to thank Paul for having a understanding and kind soul
and putting up with late papers and absent day’s. Thank you Paul it takes only
a honest and respectable teacher to do all of these things.

6.5.09

ORIGINAL diagnostic essay

Nicolette Smith Smith 1
Paul Gasparo
English 111
January 26, 2009


Supernatural abilities.
Some people believe superpowers are the product of a supernatural mind. When thinking
of a superpower, one may suggest that it is the power to fly or become invisible. The power of
being invisible or flying seems too cliché. But if I were able to wake up one morning and find
myself with a superpower, it would be the ability to see into the future.

When using this power I would use it in a responsible manner, meaning only for good.
Seeing into the future seems like a gift and a curse, being that things that happen can
possibly be either good or bad, or maybe even both. Either way this superpower will become a
helping tool. The way I would be able to look into the future, will be looking into a gold box and
entering a situation that I am presented with and take out the results of the situation.

While having this ability, I will be able to predict any dramatic action and replace them
with much positive actions, as well as well as being able to tell other people’s fortunes. For
example, if a close friend approached me and told me about a problem that they have
encountered, I will be able to give them the best advice.

This superhuman power that I have been blessed to wake up in the morning with can very
well either hurt or help others but it would be an advantage that will be used to possibly correct
corrupted mistakes or accidents.

The Wolverine

Wolverine, The origin filled the viewer with a lot of emotion, very intense. Wolverine was unlike any other movie I have ever attempted to watch. The movie made open to watching this type of action film, I never really attempted to get into any type of action movie or any comic book movies but actually knowing the origin of one of the characters, Wolverine had me really involved and interested in the history of how it all began. I wasn’t so much into the violence or the aspect of war, but the intensity and emotion is what drew my attention in. This movie had a very unique plot to it because everyone had a special quality/power and throughout the movie the audience had a chance to learn about that unique power. Logan (Hugh Jackman) has an incredible gift. Logan’s brother used his power for more evil than good, which I didn’t expect. The Cain and Able effect toke into place when Logan’s brother “killed” his girlfriend that emotion drew deep into the audience because it was something that the audience would have never thought that would happen ! Overall this movie was so intense it sent me on an adrenalin ride, anticipating what will happen next. It was a lovely story, better than any story line I see now these days in the theaters. Wolverine made me more open to what action movies are all about and how the effects and history can draw the viewer in to instant entertainment. Hands down, the best action movie I have seen in years!

Revised diagnostic !

Nicolette Smith
111-28
Diagnostic essay
5-4-09

Into my looking glass
Some people strongly believe that superpowers are the product of a supernatural mind.
When thinking of a superpower, one may suggest that it is the power to fly, break a wall or even
become invisible. The power of being invisible or flying seems too cliché. But if I were able to
wake up one morning and find myself with a superpower, it would be the ability to see into the
future. I would foresee things that someone with the slightest clue could not figure out. This
ability will be handy yet it could probably become quite a bit off-handedly .
When using this power I would use it in a responsible manner, meaning only for good.
Seeing into the future seems like a gift and a curse, being that things that happen can
possibly be either good or bad, or maybe even both. Either way this super natural power will
become a helping tool. The way I would be able to look into the future, will be me looking into a
gold box and entering a situation that I am presented with and take out the results of the situation
in a flash. While having this ability, I will be able to predict any dramatic action or situation and
replace them with much more positive actions, as well as well as being able to tell other people’s
fortunes.
For example, if a close friend approached me and told me about a experience that they have
encountered, I will be able to give them the best advice by looking into a gold box and delivering
my friend the best advice as possible. Other than that example I would use my abilities in life, to
help me make the best decisions to stay out of harm’s way as closely as I can. When it comes to
lives surprises as far as gifts, trips, and general surprise’s I will leave that between God and my
future that would not be something I would try to foresee.
This superhuman power that I have been blessed to wake up in the morning with can very
well either hurt or help others. It can be used to stop bad intentions or encounters. Knowingly
this power would be an advantage that will save others from corrupted mistakes or accidents.

22.4.09

Creating a blog.

Not as hard as it seems..(lol). I've always wanted to create a blog (recently). I had one when I was very much younger..my pre-teen stages of life. Currently I have came up with many ideas as far as blogging goes and I keep those ideas i my handy ortinarary (black book). AS SOON as my laptop arrives I will be blogging more often and hopefully I will create my own fashion/art/music/news/entertainment blogging site ! (crosses finger) ahh!


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